Allie_Paige

Everyone make sure to read the latest update of My Arrogant Alpha! It's getting pretty wild if I may say so myself! Enjoy!

champoush

Hey! First I just wanted to say that I really loved the idea behind "My arrogant Alpha", even though I was a little disappointed. I love that a female would actually become an Alpha instead of a male, points for orginality, and I love that she would find her mate to be an Alpha of another pack so I had already fantasized events in my head. However, I was disappointed of her age, I think you'd attract a bigger audience if you make the characters older and more mature, stories where the Alphas are still in school is a tad bit unrealistic (if werewolves actually were realistic lol ;P). As for the writing, try to describe the setting more, exaggerate and the reader will get a much clearer picture and it helps to not make it seem like a checklist. 
          Sorry for this long note and for putting my foot in my mouth..
          I wish you good luck with all your work :)

Allie_Paige

@champoush Thank you for the tips I'll keep them in mind! But as for her age I figured about the 18 mark for the beginning of the book would be fine considering Ziah would age as the book goes on. And she's no longer in school the plan was she was a youngin' in her class so graduation for her has come and gone before the story began. And as for your Alpha thing, don't let go of that part because I have something big in mind. Hope you keep reading and please do keep letting me know exactly how you feel! I love here from everyone!!!:)
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Allie_Paige

If you hate me I completely understand but just so you know I have begun writing a new chapter and it is looking to be the longest and most deserved one. It may take a couple of days but I plan on getting one out and another chapter started and hopefully also out, before the fist of the new year. Hope everyone had a very merry Christmas and hope you stick with me!!

Allie_Paige

So I'm righting chapter eight, but no one has said if they want Darren and Ziah to have twins or just one baby! C'mon guys let me know what you want! I'm not trying to be pushy or anything. I just want to inclued readers.