Alliker

@AlysArden I was actually about to write a comment ;) here goes: I love the eerie mood that you've created. You can almost sense the humidity and the looming darkness. I love when you can sense what the characters are experiencing. I would love to get a better feel with Adele's father, but I probably will during the next chapters.
          	And Adele - I like that she's ordinary, the girl in the middle of the ore extreme kind of people you find in high school (the nerd vs. the cheerleader). I'm excited about the upcoming chapters.

Alliker

@AlysArden I was actually about to write a comment ;) here goes: I love the eerie mood that you've created. You can almost sense the humidity and the looming darkness. I love when you can sense what the characters are experiencing. I would love to get a better feel with Adele's father, but I probably will during the next chapters.
          And Adele - I like that she's ordinary, the girl in the middle of the ore extreme kind of people you find in high school (the nerd vs. the cheerleader). I'm excited about the upcoming chapters.