Allouette

Hi. Thank you for becoming my fan. I really appreciate it. I hope you are enjoying my story.
          

Thanks for fanning ! :)

Hey there! =]
          Thankyou soooooooo much for reading and your comments, you have no idea how much it means to me!
          Are you planning on uploading anytime?
          Your story is really great so far and I need more! =P
          
          Much Love,
          Kylie.x

Hi! I wanted to­ ask if you could please take ­a look at my story 
          
          The Blood Journal 
          Emmerel seems t­o be having terrible luck in h­er life, her boyfriend died an­d her mother is like she might­ as well be dead. Her past is ­unknown and connects her and h­er beautiful music to a great ­battle that has been kept secr­et for centuries. 
          Kale is an ex­-protector, he was once great ­and looked up to by rookies un­til he disappeared off the map­, his whereabouts known only b­y his father and a few others ­he could trust with his life. ­He knows more about Emmerel's ­history than she does herself,­ but is that enough for him? O­r does he want to know more? 
          Aidan, a syc­hopathic killer on the loose w­ho has a literal taste for blo­od. A woman like a cat who lik­es to play with her mouse befo­re she consumes it. 
          
          It would be so ­great of you if you could revi­ew my story and any sort of fe­edback is truly appreciated. 
          
          If you'd like m­e to returne the favour I'd be­ glad to, all you have to do is ask! =] 
          
          Thankyou for an­ytime you give up for me and my story! 
          
          Much Love, 
          Kylie.x

I just wanted to say thanks for becoming a fan and reading my novel, Ashes to Embers. I've just got back from sending it to a literary agency so I'm feeling really grateful for all the help and encouragement, even if it doesn't feel like you've done anything, because you have  =]
          Good luck with your writing too.
          

hey allouette. how do u, um, make a story group?!

Boo! lol, i recently wrote two new stories and would love to get some constructive criticism. Let me know what you think of them :]
          
          MR. HOLIER THAN THOU
          Synopsis: 
          He has a twisted sense of humor and he hates my hair colour. He feeds me chokoberries just so he can kiss me and taste them from my mouth. 
          The bastard is my Master. 
          Alston. The atrocious Fae. 
          She has the ugliest hair he has ever seen and does not appreciate his amazing sense of humor. She loses her temper and her sharp tongue can outrun any Fae he has ever known. 
          The urchin is my servant. 
          Méav. The raven haired ecce.
          http://www.wattpad.com/271532-mr-holier-than-thou
          Quick Fact: Over 80% of the ppl who read the Chapter 1 continue on to read Chapter 3.
          Which % are you?
          
          SHATTERED HEARTS
          Synopsis:
          Life is an empty shell if there is no one there beside you to share it with. Celest knows that all too well. After overhearing her fiancé making love with her step-sister, she shatters. Her quiet reserve is pushed aside to let out a torrent of emotions that have been boiling for the past years. 
          In an attempt to distance herself from all those who belittle her, she decides to take a long trip to South America.  She finds herself taking a flight to Margarita Island with one other lone passenger on the plane.
          Too bad life doesn’t always work out as planned.
          http://www.wattpad.com/310538-shattered-hearts
          

Thanks for becoming a fan. 
          If you ever need a review for your story then just ask.

@dreamybanana: Sure - it's probably a good idea.

@Allouette: Np. Would you like me to go through an edit it. I'm not an editor or anything but a bit of constructive criticism can be useful, and I have some free time.