Ally-Callie

Hey guys. I've been slowly editing holding out and removing some of the useless material in it.
          	Please read through my book holding out and let me know what you think.
          	Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. 
          	Allyx

Ally-Callie

Hey guys. I've been slowly editing holding out and removing some of the useless material in it.
          Please read through my book holding out and let me know what you think.
          Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. 
          Allyx

Ally-Callie

Good evening all. I have just updated and modified a few parts of my book 'Holding Out' 
          I have added questions and extra material to the bottom of each chapter to engage more with my readers.
          Please comment and share my book to get it out there for others to see and don't forget to vote please.
          Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. 
          I am in the process of other stories of different genres to this one and hope you enjoy them.
          Regards
          Ally xx

Ally-Callie

Good evening all.
          I have updated the intro for Holding Out and I have added pics if each characters likeness so it's easier to picture them throughout the story.
          Enjoy.
          P.s. don't forget to hit like and vote.
          P.s.s. feel free to comment on the bottom of each chapter as you progress through about your likes and dislikes.
          Much love Ally

jesciehall

Thanks for the follow love! Check out my books if you're interested. I'd love to hear what you think. Xoxo 

Ally-Callie

@jesciehall would you mind checking out my book 'Holding Out' I would love to know what an amazing and accomplished writer thinks. You don't have to if not interested or too busy. I would appreciate any feedback is all.
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jesciehall

@Mummyinsane aw thats awesome! Thank you! 
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Ally-Callie

@jesciehall I'm in love with your player, partner series. Especially Adrian at the birth. Excited for the next chapter 
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Ally-Callie

Good evening all. I am trying to upload the full version of Holding Out but it is showing completely different on my phone app than it does on my laptop.
          My laptop has 58 parts and then a thank you for reading. Somehow my phone is showing 96 chapters and most are listed twice.
          Please be patient with me while I try sort this out.
          

Ally-Callie

Good evening people.
          I have just popped up a couple of excerpts from book that I have been working on. They are only really to gauge opinions in both my writing style and the story lines.
          Nice wolfie (not the name of the book. It's just that section and you will understandwhy) has a run down of the storyline attached.
          Bathroom break (excerpt from Holding Out) does not and is just a snippet of a kinda steamy bathroom makeout session. I will modify that one as soon as possible to explain the storyline in detail.
          Please check them out and let me know what you think. I value constructive criticism feedback highly.
          Regards
          Allycat

Ally-Callie

An interesting werewolf story that follows Hycinth/cinn and her best friend Luca who helps her escape the terrible night that alpha Leander kills her family in vengeance. She just doesn't know for what.
          A long game of cat and mouse as she and Luca change their lives far away to hide. Constantly moving in fear of the alpha that still hunts his little mate to claim what is his. 
          Did I fail to mention that right before  he kills daddy dearest, Leander caught sight of Cinn and instantly recognised her as his mate before she turned and ran.
          Its a really good read and the author has a unique writing style.
          Highly recommend if you are into your shifter books.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/112075804

Ally-Callie

I found this odd from the start really.
          She gets rejected by her mate who happens to be an alpha. Thus turned rogue because if it she gets on with her life until one day she is met with an overbearing alpha that not only turns out to be the alpha king but he decides to claim her as his mate. Yes, it is that odd but I promise you it will be worth the read. He is disgusted by the fact that her true mate rejected her and wants his name so he can kill him for it. She denies and a lot of back and forth antics between the two, they end up falling in love. A lot happens in this book and as much as you will hate the ending and believe me you will be beside yourself when it ends. It is redeemed with the sequel Sybil.
          Its a good read but I wouldn't exactly read it again. 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/68133437

Ally-Callie

Where to start with this one.
          It borderlines heavily on abuse, kidnapping and Stockholm syndrome in some ways and is very similar to another story that has been left to the winds after the writer went AWOL over 6 months ago.
          It follows the story of a medical student that volunteers herself in her sisters place to be that years gift to the alpha. I know what you're thinking and its not in the way you think she did. She pretends to be her younger sister instead hoping to save her sister from the horrors that have been told of the girls that are gifted to the alpha for 1 year but never return. 
          This is unlike other shifter stories. There are no such things as mates. These shifters are more wolf than man and certainly act it too.
          Don't expect your usual love at first sight mate look with this one. 
          Shes struggling to hold her ground, learn her place as a slave and survive from beatings both from the other slaves from messing up and from the other shifter females that think she is a threat after the alpha takes a liking to her. Although he won't openly admit it.
          Its a good read and an ongoing work. Its well written and keeps you wondering what on earth is going to happen next, do they find out her true identity before the alpha claims her or does she out herself to save from another lycan claims her as his sex slave.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/207642762