I am a very picky reader when it comes to stories on websites, but if you ask, I will be happy to critique your manuscript. Fully detailed and honest. 

“Without music, life would be a mistake.” 
― Friedrich Nietzsche, Twilight of the Idols

"Sleep is a disease when you have inspiration." 
―Brandy

“You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams.” 
― Dr. Seuss