AlohaElena28

Dear readers (if they existed),
          	 
          	First I want to say THANK YOU to those who spared their time for my story and for reading it. All of you are deeply appreciated, respected and I look at you with gratitude for  every vote and read that you decided to give me. 
          	
          	Second, I started writing this story as a birthday gift for one of my best friends and I published it so I can get comments on my writing style, plot and ideas, with hope to learn what my mistakes are and how to improve them.  Unfortunately, I didn't get a single comment (bad or good) and that proved that this story is not interesting, that I'm a failure  at writing and should stop thinking that I was a writer even for a second.  Still, to those who read even one chapter, sentence or a paragraph, THANK YOU!!!!!  
          	I'm not a self-absorbed person and I didn't do this for fame or to get published. I just wanted to find out if this story is worth telling or if I should change my approach. I did this as an exercise and the results were/are terrible. Maybe one day I will re-publish this story when it's finished. 
          	
          	Once again, as a goodbye note, I will express my deepest thank you's to those who were kind enough to pay attention to this story and rewarded me with their trust. 
          	
          	Thank you.
          	xx
          	Elena

AlohaElena28

Dear readers (if they existed),
           
          First I want to say THANK YOU to those who spared their time for my story and for reading it. All of you are deeply appreciated, respected and I look at you with gratitude for  every vote and read that you decided to give me. 
          
          Second, I started writing this story as a birthday gift for one of my best friends and I published it so I can get comments on my writing style, plot and ideas, with hope to learn what my mistakes are and how to improve them.  Unfortunately, I didn't get a single comment (bad or good) and that proved that this story is not interesting, that I'm a failure  at writing and should stop thinking that I was a writer even for a second.  Still, to those who read even one chapter, sentence or a paragraph, THANK YOU!!!!!  
          I'm not a self-absorbed person and I didn't do this for fame or to get published. I just wanted to find out if this story is worth telling or if I should change my approach. I did this as an exercise and the results were/are terrible. Maybe one day I will re-publish this story when it's finished. 
          
          Once again, as a goodbye note, I will express my deepest thank you's to those who were kind enough to pay attention to this story and rewarded me with their trust. 
          
          Thank you.
          xx
          Elena

AlohaElena28

I don't know if you have noticed but the first couple of chapters are written in past tense, so I'm making a few changes to the old ones. The first one is already changed and here is Chapter 2 too ---> http://my.w.tt/UiNb/j59fBM9WQu. Check it out and I will post a new chapter from Crescendo tomorrow.  
          
          here is the link again of Girls - Stories about modern women  - The Beginning: Chapter 2  http://my.w.tt/UiNb/j59fBM9WQu 
          
          Vote and comment too. Thanks ^.^