AlohaElena28

Dear readers (if they existed),
          	 
          	First I want to say THANK YOU to those who spared their time for my story and for reading it. All of you are deeply appreciated, respected and I look at you with gratitude for  every vote and read that you decided to give me. 
          	
          	Second, I started writing this story as a birthday gift for one of my best friends and I published it so I can get comments on my writing style, plot and ideas, with hope to learn what my mistakes are and how to improve them.  Unfortunately, I didn't get a single comment (bad or good) and that proved that this story is not interesting, that I'm a failure  at writing and should stop thinking that I was a writer even for a second.  Still, to those who read even one chapter, sentence or a paragraph, THANK YOU!!!!!  
          	I'm not a self-absorbed person and I didn't do this for fame or to get published. I just wanted to find out if this story is worth telling or if I should change my approach. I did this as an exercise and the results were/are terrible. Maybe one day I will re-publish this story when it's finished. 
          	
          	Once again, as a goodbye note, I will express my deepest thank you's to those who were kind enough to pay attention to this story and rewarded me with their trust. 
          	
          	Thank you.
          	xx
          	Elena

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AlohaElena28

@kneeldownforzayn this is so random, but thank you. <3
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AlohaElena28

Dear readers (if they existed),
           
          First I want to say THANK YOU to those who spared their time for my story and for reading it. All of you are deeply appreciated, respected and I look at you with gratitude for  every vote and read that you decided to give me. 
          
          Second, I started writing this story as a birthday gift for one of my best friends and I published it so I can get comments on my writing style, plot and ideas, with hope to learn what my mistakes are and how to improve them.  Unfortunately, I didn't get a single comment (bad or good) and that proved that this story is not interesting, that I'm a failure  at writing and should stop thinking that I was a writer even for a second.  Still, to those who read even one chapter, sentence or a paragraph, THANK YOU!!!!!  
          I'm not a self-absorbed person and I didn't do this for fame or to get published. I just wanted to find out if this story is worth telling or if I should change my approach. I did this as an exercise and the results were/are terrible. Maybe one day I will re-publish this story when it's finished. 
          
          Once again, as a goodbye note, I will express my deepest thank you's to those who were kind enough to pay attention to this story and rewarded me with their trust. 
          
          Thank you.
          xx
          Elena

AlohaElena28

I don't know if you have noticed but the first couple of chapters are written in past tense, so I'm making a few changes to the old ones. The first one is already changed and here is Chapter 2 too ---> http://my.w.tt/UiNb/j59fBM9WQu. Check it out and I will post a new chapter from Crescendo tomorrow.  
          
          here is the link again of Girls - Stories about modern women  - The Beginning: Chapter 2  http://my.w.tt/UiNb/j59fBM9WQu 
          
          Vote and comment too. Thanks ^.^