Aloha_Betch

Sorry guys it took a lot longer to go over them than I thought, posting chapter 1 now

theosvckss

The chapters were so good! So glad you’re back :)
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1amn0tg4y

@Aloha_Betch YAYYYY! SO HAPPY YOU'RE DONE! 
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hikasa287

My oh my!! I missed you so much and I’m so happy to hear these news <3 Thank you so much !!!!
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ValliantRose

May I ask what you’re doing with your other account and the story on it? Just curious

Creddles

Can I ask what your other account is called?
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Aloha_Betch

That was for my readers that are huge supporters of me and they were going to follow me along on my journey of rewriting it  but I decided to just do it privately 
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Aloha_Betch

Sorry guys it took a lot longer to go over them than I thought, posting chapter 1 now

theosvckss

The chapters were so good! So glad you’re back :)
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1amn0tg4y

@Aloha_Betch YAYYYY! SO HAPPY YOU'RE DONE! 
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hikasa287

My oh my!! I missed you so much and I’m so happy to hear these news <3 Thank you so much !!!!
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Aloha_Betch

I will be going over the first 5 chapters tonight so they will either be posted later tonight or tmrw

Blueclown500

KEEP THE PICTURES PLEASE @Aloha_Betch
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inhumanmerp

@Aloha_Betch omg im so excited!! can't wait :)  we luv ya <333
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Aloha_Betch

Hey guys I wanted to update y’all. Ik u guys have been very patient with me and I rly appreciate it I want to list some of the reasons why I’m rewriting and what the new book will look like.
          
          1. When I first started writing the book I was in 8th grade, I am now almost graduated from hs. Taking that into account a lot of the earlier chapters were very bad quality writing and I cringed whenever I read them myself, I also wasn’t very educated back then and couldn’t tell what was offensive and what wasn’t so I want to go back and rewrite those errors as well. 
          
          2. There were way too many chapters that were very short and I found it overwhelming for the readers, my later chapters do get longer but the first few barley make it to 1000 words so I will be mixing the shorter chapters into 1 so when I begin updating it’s going to be like 3 updates in 1. 
          
          3. Thank you all for being very patient with me just so you guys have something to look forward to I’m going to release the first 5 rewritten chapters. That does not mean I will be updating every week it’s just so you guys have something to look forward to while you wait. 
          
          4. I wanted to thank everyone for being very patient with me and the book I really appreciate it.

Urhomiedowntheroad

@Aloha_Betch ofc! been here from the start ;) except that it was too laggy to comment lol
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SecretAssassinL

@Aloha_Betch Those reasons are totally valid, and I'm jappy you enjoy writing, so I understood from what you said, I'm looking forward to it^^
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Dreamless_Person

Hey, I just wanted to ask how the rewriting is going? Are you still rewriting, or are you taking a break? Loved the book and can't wait for the rewrite! :)

AyieshaWray6

@Dreamless_Person wait did you delete the original book because I was looking for it to continue from where the Mc was placed in a dreading school and he meets the Ml friends and thier where going to make him meet back rider.......and the worst thing about it is that I was so depressed because I couldn't find it but am happy that you are writing it back
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Aloha_Betch

I’m still rewriting it’s taking a while bc I’m very busy with school I may start releasing some rewritten chapters once a week once I’m halfway thru the rewriting 
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