Alovelyleo730
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Alovelyleo730
Hello it's me again I now have four chapters up! Please take a read, I need you guys to feed back. I'm new to this but I'm trying to be true to this!!! Any feedback is helpful. Don't forget to get vote, like and share it's greatly appreciated! Oh and you guys are not feeling it say that too it's ok I can handle constructive criticism. Until next time!✌️
Alovelyleo730
Hey everyone I wanted to drop a few lines and see what you guys may think about my book! Please feel free to leave a comment in the section. I'd like to know honestly what you guys think. Let me know! I'm interested in what I may have or not have to push forward. Writing was once something I chose to do in order to have an outlet however my writing is for a more mature audience and I am ok with that. You will need to be as well. Okay now go enjoy a read from me! You will get a mixture of imagined and real with a splash of sexy sensual couples and their dramas, communication, ups and downs living through the pages. Please feel free to take a reading journey! I would love to connect!
Brownskinglow22
Hi, so I’ve taken a look at your chapters and one thing I can say is you need quotation marks on where the characters are speaking. It’s hard to understand what’s going on if your book isn’t structured for that . Also where is the book heading ? What’s the reasoning behind each chapter.