heya! everything i’m about to say is entirely good-natured and in no way intended to hurt you:
i noticed a lot of grammar and structural mistakes in your book, and i was wondering if you’d give me permission to edit it and make it the best that it can be? this is entirely your decision and you can feel free to say no, i’m just trying to help haha. dm me if you agree and we can discuss details, but if not then just let me know you’d like to keep it how it is and i’ll be on my merry way. i really liked the story and i want to make sure everyone else sees it as it is: a masterpiece.
get back to me soon,
-aj :)