AlternativePenguins

I read your book Never Saw It Coming. You asked for my feedback so here it is:
          
          First of all I think you're a great writer. You clearly have a great that tugs at my heartstrings.
          
          Secondly your writing style is to die for. The words and layout complement each other so well. They add another layer to the story.
          
          You obviously been through a lot. I can tell by the way you express your pain. I hope your pain will decrease, because you don't deserve it. You are a beautiful human being. I wish you all the strength in the world. 
          
          Your story is great. I don't think you lost the storyline. But the person you write about lost their way of living life. That's why it might look like a chaos. I hope that in the future the character of the book finds their way again. I would love to read that. 

Hey!!! 
          How r u¿
          Can you plzzz check my book “Story Of A Girl” it's a poetry book 
          If you like it Plzz vote and comment too
          Byeee
          Take Care :)

@HeDecidesToWrite well I'm happy to make you happy. I share the same love for poetry as you do. I understand how beautiful it is and how lovely it is to have others love it too. Thank you for writing such beautiful and inspirational poems. Thank you for being you❤

@HeDecidesToWrite you deserve to have your voice heard, so I'm more than happy to keep voting and reading. They are beautiful poems, if you didn't disclaim that you were a beginner I wouldn't be able to tell. The beautiful way you use rhyming to further the meaning is absolutely incredible. Keep up the amazing work, and don't let anyone get you down, for your poems are truly life changing❤❤

Thank you for the follow!❤️
          If you have time, could you check out my book, The Bad Boy and the Football Girl?”

Thank you so much for voting on my poems!!

Hey thanks for adding, “The Games ThatBroke Me” to your reading list.