AltheaSumail

I'm so lost and stuck about my story and I can't even revise it because I don't know what to change (⁠っ⁠˘̩⁠╭⁠╮⁠˘̩⁠)⁠っ Let's go Critique to critique people! Genuine one.
          	
          	The good part 
          	The not good part
          	What to improve
          	How to improve
          	
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AltheaSumail

@Molahsmitijro My turn over  will be at december 4 hehe!
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Molahsmitijro

@AltheaSumail Yes sounds lovely. I'd start this week. 
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AltheaSumail

@Molahsmitijro I forgot about this HAHAHA got busy. I mean we read 3 chapters of each our story and give feedback or critique. How about this?
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NishaPsons

Hey Athlea, what would you do if tomorrow were Earth’s last day?
           
          Me? I’d probably panic, make chai, and try to write one last poem before the world burns.
           
          But you know what Siya would do?
           
          She’d walk straight into the chaos with a playlist in her ears, love letters in her pockets, and secrets she never told anyone.
           
          ✨ Find out what happens in my latest book, LAST DAY. It’s messy, it’s real, and it might just break your heart in the best way.
           
          Read it now on Wattpad. Let me know if you would stay, run, or say “I love you” before the end.
           
          Drop a ❤️ if you’re reading, and let’s talk about what you would do on your last day. I’ll be waiting in the comments.
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Rizzyanaramirez

when po next update sa IANYP? 

AltheaSumail

@Rizzyanaramirez Thank you bhiee (⁠っ⁠˘̩⁠╭⁠╮⁠˘̩⁠)⁠っ
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Rizzyanaramirez

@AltheaSumail yes po, maganda po kasi yung story niyo, and there's no need to change other parts po, waiting nalang po sa update niyo
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AltheaSumail

@Rizzyanaramirez ngayon ko lang nakita Ang motivation na'to!! (⁠☆⁠▽⁠☆⁠)
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AltheaSumail

I'm so lost and stuck about my story and I can't even revise it because I don't know what to change (⁠っ⁠˘̩⁠╭⁠╮⁠˘̩⁠)⁠っ Let's go Critique to critique people! Genuine one.
          
          The good part 
          The not good part
          What to improve
          How to improve
          
          ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ

AltheaSumail

@Molahsmitijro My turn over  will be at december 4 hehe!
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Molahsmitijro

@AltheaSumail Yes sounds lovely. I'd start this week. 
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AltheaSumail

@Molahsmitijro I forgot about this HAHAHA got busy. I mean we read 3 chapters of each our story and give feedback or critique. How about this?
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AltheaSumail

You all!! I have 4 slots only this Saturday and Sunday. I'm making a free promotion of stories to my TikTok and fb account 
          
          TikTok: @Altist
          Fb: Alumina heat kalliums
          
          Take it noooowwww! 4 onlee  drop it here rn! ‍♀️

evzlllie

@AltheaSumail The one intitled CRUSH'N YOU
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AltheaSumail

@evzlllie YEEP!!! I still have one slot (⁠◕⁠ᴗ⁠◕⁠✿⁠)
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