Pmarieem

Hi! Thanks for the follow! I hope you enjoy my story. I started reading Wild and Beautiful this morning and I like it a lot so far! Can't wait for more..

Pmarieem

Feedback is always appreciated  thanks! Ill make sure to do the same!
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Alvatross

@Pmarieem My pleasure! I'm about to begin reading your story actually :) If you would like any help/feedback I would love to help you out!
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wonderfall-

Hᴇʟʟᴏ, Aʟᴠᴀ! I ʟᴏᴠᴇ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴏᴏᴅs ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʙᴀᴄᴋɢʀᴏᴜɴᴅ. Yᴏᴜʀ ᴘᴀʀᴀɢʀᴀᴘʜ ʜᴀs ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴄʀɪᴛɪǫᴜᴇᴅ. Pᴏsᴛ #975 ᴀɴᴅ #976 (ᴛʜᴇ sᴇᴄᴏɴᴅ ᴘᴏsᴛ ɪs ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ɴᴇxᴛ ᴘᴀɢᴇ).
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/774503/950/25/first-paragraphs.-how-good-is-yours-critiques.

Hannah_Wittke

Thank you. For your advice! I love how honest you are. I will be changing it up... I hope you like my new Idea!
          -H

Hannah_Wittke

Lol and thanks! Siler was my great grandma's name! 
            -H
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Alvatross

Yeah, that's better :) I like her name, Siler, right? Pretty and unique
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Hannah_Wittke

I changed the idea a bit! I haven't seen this idea yet! I hope it's not over used! :P 
            -H
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