dodoreremimi
the poem TEAR is short and sweet. If u dont mind i would suggest u to express ur feelings better(my personal thinking). PLS check out my poems --a bit classic. Hope u lyk it and pls comment on it. wanna improve. following u, pls follow me back.
AlvinFar
i don't mind at all, but can you elaborate on what u mean by expressing my feelings better? You must have a opinion on what you what of done.