Hi, author! I just want to give a small constructive criticism regarding your story WRECK ME, MS. SENATOR. I noticed po kasi na medyo dikit-dikit yung paragraphs and dialogues, kaya medyo nakakalito siyang basahin minsan, especially sa intense scenes. I suggest adding more spacing per paragraph and separating dialogues properly para mas smooth and easier for readers to follow. For example, every time may bagong speaker or bagong emotion/scene, mas maganda if naka-separate paragraph siya. Mas magiging malinis tingnan and mas mae-enhance yung emotions ng story. Overall, maganda naman yung plot and writing style mo. Nakikita rin yung effort and emotions sa scenes. Formatting and spacing lang talaga yung kailangan i-improve a little para mas enjoyable basahin. Keep writing, author!
