Alyosha_Flame

Update on the rewrite of the current book.
          	
          	Unfortunately, I'm putting it and any future content relating to 'Future of Calamity'/Berseria on hold until further notice. Despite the story constantly on my mind for ideas and development, I have been sorely lacking in the actual writing of the book, and my productivity with writing has been at an all time low. So I have decided to stop letting it weigh down my thoughts and other stories I may want to explore.
          	
          	Choosing such a big story to undertake with my lack of writing experience initially has been both a benefit and drawback. It has massively helped in my skills, but has completely barred the way for other shorter stories I may want to do.
          	
          	This doesn't mean that all I've done will suddenly vanish. I may still work on parts, and the story may randomly appear, but don't expect any updates on progress or plans for the foreseeable future.
          	
          	I sincerely apologise to any readers who may have been looking forward to the rewrite, as I was too. But unfortunately I was attracted to the idea of its completion, and not the journey getting there. Expect some activity from me nonetheless, as I am still getting ideas about what stories I can try and tackle.
          	
          	I hope you all are having a lovely summer, and have a wonderful night. ♡

Foxtrot315

@Alyosha_Flame  hey man I completely understand
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Alyosha_Flame

Update on the rewrite of the current book.
          
          Unfortunately, I'm putting it and any future content relating to 'Future of Calamity'/Berseria on hold until further notice. Despite the story constantly on my mind for ideas and development, I have been sorely lacking in the actual writing of the book, and my productivity with writing has been at an all time low. So I have decided to stop letting it weigh down my thoughts and other stories I may want to explore.
          
          Choosing such a big story to undertake with my lack of writing experience initially has been both a benefit and drawback. It has massively helped in my skills, but has completely barred the way for other shorter stories I may want to do.
          
          This doesn't mean that all I've done will suddenly vanish. I may still work on parts, and the story may randomly appear, but don't expect any updates on progress or plans for the foreseeable future.
          
          I sincerely apologise to any readers who may have been looking forward to the rewrite, as I was too. But unfortunately I was attracted to the idea of its completion, and not the journey getting there. Expect some activity from me nonetheless, as I am still getting ideas about what stories I can try and tackle.
          
          I hope you all are having a lovely summer, and have a wonderful night. ♡

Foxtrot315

@Alyosha_Flame  hey man I completely understand
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Alyosha_Flame

Chapter is currently in progress. Slow progress, but it's slowly working itself out while I sort the final profile for the MC. After that's all finished, it'll be hopefully a lot easier to get in a consistent writing motion, it's been awhile after all.
          
          Nonetheless, I hope everyone is well and relaxing nicely wherever you may be! ♥︎

Alyosha_Flame

Quick question, what word count would everyone prefer? In my previous books, I tended to jump between 3k and 6k words per chapter. I'm comfortable with doing either, but the time taken to get a chapter complete would vary. So I wanted to ask if anyone had a general preference?

Rave_Bloodshire

Whatever you think seems best. I personally don't have a preference. Usually, if there was a longer chapter, I'd take breaks in between and digest the content bit by bit. [Of course, that's just me and my short attention span---not sure if this was helpful or not :p]
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Alyosha_Flame

|Why is it that birds fly? 
          
          To soar the spotless skies mottled by heavenly clouds and sea-kissed winds, to see their reflection in the rolling waves and look down on the creatures so unimportant, so caged, for they aren’t truly free?
          
          Yet the ever naive sparrow that endlessly roams the great blue above, knows nothing of what it is to toil and tear through the dirt and grime below, caked in blood, mud and ash in search of one unholy desire across Desolation’s blackened husk.
          
          To Velvet Crowe, why birds fly is irrelevant, only that they are innocent and blind to the hounding predators that would eagerly gore the unfortunate to satiate a thirst, a hunger. A hunger she so eagerly feeds, the kindling of a reckoning. So, when these exorcists return to their iron nests sightlessly built in the den of red-eyed wolves, she would make sure to be there waiting for them. Because it was what that man deserved.
          
          A Shepherd herding a flock to the slaughter.
          
          “Never fall to the fragility of emotion. A quality all should uphold when stemming the daemon tide. Heed reason, not instinct, for our mind is what separates us from beasts”. But when we are deprived of our ability to feel, what is it that makes us human?
          
          Such thoughts would ring in his ears every waking moment that passed since that night, an endless tinnitus of torrential rain. It was what strayed his blade from aiming true, for his resolve to be tested; to purge what threatens humanity. In the depths of his own pathetic helplessness, Lucius Asteria knew only one thing.
          
          Fire adheres to no master. Not reason, nor emotion.
          
          It simply burns. And will, is endless fuel for such an inferno to rage. A sentiment shared by another. Let it burn within you, until it can burn without.
          
          No more reason, and let emotion be the spark.
          
          For when you leave the gilded cage, and see how the forest around was always ablaze, relish in your newfound freedom—until you are what burns in the end.|
          

Funkmire

@Alyosha_Flame  yeah we cooking off just the starter. I'm here for this, Berseria is the best Tales.
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Rave_Bloodshire

@Alyosha_Flame This is so epic! I got goosebumps just reading this!!
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Alyosha_Flame

Hey all! Long time no see! Small update for anyone still around.
          
          Everything is all ready for the story! Cover, description, characters, notes... now all that's left is to actually find time to write it.
          
          Seeing as I do think reader support helps my motivation, I have decided that will be updating my progress on here as I go. However, these chapters and updates will have no schedule, and likely be quite spaced out in case of any changes. This helps me not feel pressured in getting content out and disappointing myself
          
          This book has gone through more than five iterations, with multiple note rewrites (in which there are over thirty pages) and character overhauls, in addition to cover designs. However, I have finally landed on something I'm content with delivering.
          
          I hope you are all well! Keep an eye out in the coming days for a sneak peek at the book in an announcement ♡

Funkmire

@Alyosha_Flame Ay sorry this turned up so late but glad you're keeping it pushing. It's good to just go your own pace really, and write when you want. I'm hyped for the rewrite though, sounds like you invested a lot. It'll deliver I'm sure.
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Alyosha_Flame

@Rave_Bloodshire I appreciate how much you're looking forward to it! It really helps me in staying motivated knowing that there are people looking forward to my work. Content will hopefully be arriving soon enough! ^^
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Rave_Bloodshire

@Alyosha_Flame Yes! I'm like really excited for the new version! And I think not having a schedule is smart, it seems much less stressful. It seems you've underwent so much planning, no doubt it'll pay off! :D
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Alyosha_Flame

Hey everyone! I want to give a quick update on how things are going, and a little comment about something that has happened recently.
          
          First of all, I hope you all are well and that life is treating you nicely! I've personally been extremely busy with uni life and that hasn't let up, but I'm hoping to find some spare time very soon. The story is still ongoing, with me ironing out all the fine details before anything gets released.
          
          Secondly, I wanted to make this announcement following an unfortunate event that has happened to one of the games fairly dear to me. Alchemy Stars, the game that inspired my story 'War on Fallen Stars', has recently announced its end or service coming very soon. This means the game will be going offline and no longer accessible for new players. 
          
          Even though I have long since let go of the story this is about, I noticed that it did fairly well and I actually enjoyed a lot of my writing relating to it. So, I wanted to send out one final message as appreciation to the game that helped that story - and my hobby for writing as a whole - come to life.
          
          I wish all of you reading this the best, and I hope to see and interact more with you all very soon! And thank you for all the inspiration Alchemy Stars ♡

Alyosha_Flame

@Funkmire I appreciate that a ton! It's difficult and there's times where I don't write at all for ages, but I try my best to keep on top of it all, and I'm looking forward to the time I can upload the story for everyone to see. I hope you also have a wonderful Christmas :D
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Funkmire

@Alyosha_Flame  ayyy good to see you're still alright. Honestly it's admirable how you can balance university, and life, with writing, if I did that I'd probably die. But you make that work somehow. The fact you still got the drive to write is amazing, really.  Hope you the best and a Merry Christmas as well.
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Alyosha_Flame

This will probably be my final announcement for a long time.
          
          I'm currently struggling with writing in of itself, and attempting to keep a consistent upload schedule and status on my profile. I've been feeling guilty about leaving stories potentially unfinished, so I've made quite a hard decision.
          
          I'll be going inactive and removing my current book from my profile. All older books will remain, but that one will be gone, and not getting updated (on here.)
          
          I'll be working on it and any other book ideas in my own files and keeping them documented. And then, whenever one has been completed, I may come back to fully upload it onto this site or another. 
          
          But for now, it's likely goodbye. So thank you all for the continued support, I probably wouldn't have gotten this far without you guys. I hope you all enjoy what remains, and hopefully I'll see you guys again soon enough! Bye-bye! ♥︎

Alyosha_Flame

@Rave_Bloodshire I thank you for all the kind words, it does really help. I just figured this would help me make any refined changes and final thoughts without constantly having to explain it to readers and leave them confused. So hopefully this will help me really focus and get what I want done. And who knows, maybe I'll come back a bit earlier once I've got a good amount done and feel comfortable again! But thank you for all the support ^^ ♡
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Rave_Bloodshire

@Alyosha_Flame I respect your decision, you're doing what you think is best for yourself and there's no shame in that. It's relatable for a writer to have that feeling of lacking consistency and guilt. 
            If it helps, I'm also beginning to realize that announcing your project before getting much progress done can make a writer stressed and have them feel like they're going to let people down if they don't finish on time. (It happens to me all the time!) Awesomeness takes time. And I'll be here when you return, finished book or not. 
            Thank you so much for all that you do. You're such an inspiring, enthusiastic individual. 
            Bye (for now)!
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Alyosha_Flame

@Funkmire I'm actually really happy to hear that I managed to help inspire someone to pursue their own goals with writing, that's awesome! And thank you so much for the kind words, I wish you all the best as well. Good luck with your writing dude! ^w^
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Alyosha_Flame

Chapter 3 has finished being written and is now undergoing refinement, it will be released very soon! ^^

Rave_Bloodshire

@Alyosha_Flame Yay! I can't wait to read it :)
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Alyosha_Flame

@Funkmire I appreciate that! Just been very exhausted recently from my finals so its been hard finding the motivation to write, but I'm completely focused on making sure every chapter is of the highest quality I can make it! 
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Funkmire

@Alyosha_Flame Yo! Happy you're still doing  good. I'm excited for the rest of the story
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Alyosha_Flame

I apologise on the lack of updates recently, I'm currently in the midst of my final college project so I've been quite busy and don't have much time to write. Once the finals are all over I'll be right back to focusing on my book ^^