Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going? 
          I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. Your feedback is important to me. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :))  Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)