mmandellstudentssses
I love your writing, but in your Ichika x Jinshi story, it would be great if you did some Jinshi POVs to really understand his side of the story and how he feels. it would help people sympathize with your characters. but I would also say that the writing quality was phenomenal and that the economy of language was pristine. I love your writing, and hope to see more of it.
Amalitoooo
Thank you so much for this thoughtful comment It truly means a lot to me that you’re enjoying the story and paying attention to the writing itself. Your words about the language and quality genuinely made my day.
I also really appreciate your suggestion about adding some Jinshi POVs. That’s actually an interesting idea especially since he’s such a layered character, and understanding his internal struggles could definitely add more depth and maybe even change how some scenes are perceived.
I chose to focus mainly on Ichika’s perspective to keep a bit of mystery around him, but you’re absolutely right that seeing inside his head could help readers sympathize with him more. I’ll definitely think about incorporating some of the male lead character POV in future stories
Thank you again for taking the time to write this. It means more than you know ✨