Hey! Just wanted to say your stories go hard. Your concepts and character development are genuinely next-level — I get emotionally locked in every time. I’ve read a lot of FreenBecky fics, but the way you build their arcs hits different. It feels intentional, mature, and very lived-in.
Small suggestion though — sometimes it leans a bit too cheesy. For example, in Mark of Curse, the scene where Bec finds out Freen stole the key was peak — tense, sharp, and thrilling. More scenes like that would be elite. Too many “normal” filler chapters can dilute the momentum and risk losing reader interest. You’re at your best when it’s suspenseful and adventurous.
Overall, your work is incredible and honestly deserves millions of reads especially "vampire soulmate". Keep doing what you’re doing — you’re raising the bar.❤️
