Alesya4u
Hi, my friend, can you give feedback on my draft in my profile?
AmanAman716
SeharKhan404
Hey! Just wanted to say your stories go hard. Your concepts and character development are genuinely next-level — I get emotionally locked in every time. I’ve read a lot of FreenBecky fics, but the way you build their arcs hits different. It feels intentional, mature, and very lived-in.
Small suggestion though — sometimes it leans a bit too cheesy. For example, in Mark of Curse, the scene where Bec finds out Freen stole the key was peak — tense, sharp, and thrilling. More scenes like that would be elite. Too many “normal” filler chapters can dilute the momentum and risk losing reader interest. You’re at your best when it’s suspenseful and adventurous.
Overall, your work is incredible and honestly deserves millions of reads especially "vampire soulmate". Keep doing what you’re doing — you’re raising the bar.❤️
AmanAman716
@SeharKhan404 Thank you so much, that really means a lot And yeah, Mark of Curse feels a bit cheesy on purpose.... it’s more of a flirty vibe story. Things are heading into the final steps of breaking the curse, so it’s about to get much more intense and mysterious. Really appreciate the honest feedback and support ❤️
MielaMou
Mine?
MielaMou
Author? U still there?
MielaMou
Author when will you be continuing Mine?
AmanAman716
@MielaMou I know I’m posting too late, but I’m rotating between my stories and giving each around four chapters at a time. My exams are also in less than 10 days, so I’m trying to manage everything. Please be patient with me ...I’m not someone who leaves things unfinished. I hope you understand.
kchaithu
Dear Writer please make FreenBecky share this good news when they are on good terms and enjoy their moment. Not when something happened and both are in bad terms please please na na
AmanAman716
I’m really sorry to everyone who’s been waiting for the new chapter. I’m down with a high fever right now, but I’ll try my best to post from tomorrow depending on my condition. Thank you all for your patience and understanding.
freenbeaky
@AmanAman716 heyy don't worry about us just take care of yourself first and get well soon
leafsdreams48
@AmanAman716 it's alright. Take care of yourself first. Us readers can wait. Your health is the most important thing right now. Also don't push yourself too much. Get well soon
sna7262
Hey author! Hope u r doing well.
Just wanted to know if u r going yo continue MINE?
MielaMou
Updates
AmanAman716
@MielaMou which one mine? I am taking turns to post... I posted vampire before now it's Mark's turn then i will go for mine...
MielaMou
How many chapters left for Mine and Vampire's Soulmate?
AmanAman716
@MielaMou I’m not exactly sure yet, but Mine already has at least 100+ chapters planned, and Vampire still has a lot more to come.