AmandeepGill7

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Okay so... I have a crazy whacky acid filled idea, I'm gonna make a boku no hero academia Alternate Universe fanfic but it's gonna be dark and grizzly like the old man Logan universe, I'm also gonna be changing up the lore and characteristics of some characters but other than that it's as if nothing has been changed...accept for the amounts of blood, gore, drugs and much more shit I've came up in my Quentin Tarantino-esc imagination.
          	
          	One is Bakugou, who is nicer, his father Masaro isn't actually his real father, his real dad is a marine who died in duty, the only thing Bakugou has of his dad is his dog tags and picture before he went to war, this bakugou also acts a lot like a marine and always stick to his "leave no men behind" attitude. He is a great leader and a charming guy, although because of his dad's quirk, he sometimes have some explosive side towards him called Berserker's blood where he receives no pain and would go berserk killing whoever in his way friend or foe, he also sees soldiers, cops, firefighters and doctors as the true heroes saluting to them as they pass by.
          	
          	Kirishima nothing much has changed, except he's a cannibal...yup.
          	
          	Lida major change, he's more laid back and has more of a bro feeling towards him, and when confronting stain he is more relaxed and brutally paralyzes the anti villain.
          	
          	Mineta is... well mineta
          	
          	Kaminari is overpowered as fuck!
          	
          	All might is a father figure to everyone and also change Deku's journey one for the better. And is quite overpowered, actually he could one shot most villains in his prime.
          	Nomu is going to be a massive hulking berserker cannibal who eats people with quirks to get more quirk.
          	
          	While Deku becomes Omniman... I'm not joking he becomes omniman, the power he receives from Allmight is much different from canon series and he would fight off against a number of villains without help.

AmandeepGill7

this message may be offensive 
Okay so... I have a crazy whacky acid filled idea, I'm gonna make a boku no hero academia Alternate Universe fanfic but it's gonna be dark and grizzly like the old man Logan universe, I'm also gonna be changing up the lore and characteristics of some characters but other than that it's as if nothing has been changed...accept for the amounts of blood, gore, drugs and much more shit I've came up in my Quentin Tarantino-esc imagination.
          
          One is Bakugou, who is nicer, his father Masaro isn't actually his real father, his real dad is a marine who died in duty, the only thing Bakugou has of his dad is his dog tags and picture before he went to war, this bakugou also acts a lot like a marine and always stick to his "leave no men behind" attitude. He is a great leader and a charming guy, although because of his dad's quirk, he sometimes have some explosive side towards him called Berserker's blood where he receives no pain and would go berserk killing whoever in his way friend or foe, he also sees soldiers, cops, firefighters and doctors as the true heroes saluting to them as they pass by.
          
          Kirishima nothing much has changed, except he's a cannibal...yup.
          
          Lida major change, he's more laid back and has more of a bro feeling towards him, and when confronting stain he is more relaxed and brutally paralyzes the anti villain.
          
          Mineta is... well mineta
          
          Kaminari is overpowered as fuck!
          
          All might is a father figure to everyone and also change Deku's journey one for the better. And is quite overpowered, actually he could one shot most villains in his prime.
          Nomu is going to be a massive hulking berserker cannibal who eats people with quirks to get more quirk.
          
          While Deku becomes Omniman... I'm not joking he becomes omniman, the power he receives from Allmight is much different from canon series and he would fight off against a number of villains without help.

DarkGodUltra

I have a question......why you have 20 follower when have a little follower are your book is good? Or my book is bad?

DarkGodUltra

@AmandeepGill7 thank you for your answer
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AmandeepGill7

@HansVonManstein I honestly have no idea, but I assure you that your writing skill is 100% better than mine.
            I got only maybe 1 or 2 stars for my stories and that's about it.
            And some of my followers are friends too, hope that answered your question
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AmandeepGill7

All right  I'm gonna be serious here, Ima need help guys. My writing skill sucks and I was wondering if anybody would like to help that'd be great if not, no worries I'm just checking if anybody has some freetime. 
          If you are a gears expert and shield hero expert your help would be so much crucial to me.

AmandeepGill7

@AmandeepGill7 or would you guys think it'd be better if I tried again or go for a version 2? Because to be honest I feel like it's rushed. So... what do you guys think? Reboot or v2?
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