TheSnakeKing16
I just had an idea if your willing to humor it. For the hero version, Y/N’s suit should be the inverted version AFO’s suit while villain Y/N’s be black.
Amateureader_
TheSnakeKing16
Can you label your stories please, it’s hard to tell the difference from the covers alone. Have one with “hero version” and the other “villain version”.
Amateureader_
I won’t change the titles cause it’d spoil what story newer readers are reading.
But to make it a tad easier on returning readers (And I enjoy being a bit difficult), I changed the tags, the Hero story has “hero” and the Villain’s has “villain”.
ShannonRich308
Have you watched one piece
Rincon2318
I've come here after catching up to Villain and planning to read Hero and catch up by the end of today. I'll be honest it's definitely rough around the edges, with the little errors in spelling and such. But that's honestly fine everyone has their starting point. The main thing that got me reading this is the LI as I really like Toru/her design, I was curious on if you plan to make the relationship actually develop as in have any intimacy, if not that's a major blow.
Rincon2318
@Amateureader_ Thanks for replying and it's interesting to hear that it was entirely random, but I would like an answer on the last bit if possible.
Amateureader_
I have the same criticisms myself XD
(I’ll most likely rewrite some scenes if I get time when the stories complete)
As for making Hagakure the love interest, that was very much a taped together part.
The original version had no love interest, but now some parts can’t work without the two together.
GigaGeloAn
the son of afo is actually PEAK
Amateureader_
Glad you think so, in my opinion some parts I aren’t as good as I thought it would be.
But happy that you and others are enjoying it :D
BrayanCantu8
Hey I have to ask a question: are you going to write mha hero rising movie that takes place between s4 and s5
Amateureader_
Yeah, I skipped the first one because I didn’t know how to properly incorporate it, nothing really happened to (Y/N) in the movie, but I will add the other 3
Mcconde99
I’m a bit confused, there’s 2 versions of the book but I can’t tell what the main difference is other than chapters? (I want to know before I put time into reading them, please and thanks)
Amateureader_
I have an unpublished blank chapter on both, the title tells me which is which, but another difference is the Villain’s story is more popular, probably because it’s the last one I publish chapters for, so it’s the most recent on my profile
ShannonRich308
Do you like star wars
Amateureader_
I’ve got a mate really into Star Wars, I know some of the characters but do my best to listen to his rants
Nephilim1h
Please update more for Son of All For One (BNHA x
Amateureader_
Should I add the movies to the Son of AFO story?
At the time of this post, I have only seen Two Heroes and Heroes Rising, the story still works excluding them so I’d like to hear your thoughts on this choice.
Mr_TV_Head-Man
@Amateureader_ late reply but you could just mention it and say he wasn't given an invitation
Amateureader_
funny thing is, I want to add (Y/N)’s reaction to Nine, but Two Heroes doesn’t do much to the plot. It’d be weird to add one and not the other.