Hi Sufyan Khan
I came across your story *The Boy Who Fell With the Sky*, and I just wanted to say it stayed with me longer than I expected.
There is something very quiet but powerful in the way you wrote Akira’s experience. The moment where he notices the light in the sky and feels drawn to it felt very real. It was not just about something strange happening, it felt like that pull we sometimes have toward things we do not understand but cannot ignore. I also liked the feeling in the line about the “voice that shouldn’t exist” because it added a kind of soft tension without forcing it.
What stood out to me is how you let the mystery breathe. You did not rush it. It felt personal, almost like we were walking beside him instead of just reading about him.
At the same time, it made me wonder if the story is not reaching as many readers as it could yet. It has a strong idea and a feeling that is easy to connect with, but it still feels like it is just waiting to be discovered.
I wanted to ask, have you published any of your work on Amazon or Goodreads, or are you planning to?
If you ever feel like sharing more about your writing, I would genuinely enjoy hearing from you.
