Hello! Just wanted to drop by and thank you for voting on my story Treacherous and wish you a beautiful day!
P.S. I hope you love reading it!
Love, Tamara. ❤❤❤
@TamaraHeartz I just finished reading "Flickers"! Oh my god!!! I loved it, your writing was beautify, each of the flash backs made me smile like an idiot or laugh, but mostly the ending was lovely. It's by far my favourite short story, ever!!
In your books description, read a bunch of the paragraph long synopsys for movies etc. That will help you show the reader the drama, instead of walk through the points statement by statement
@TevitaMoala Thanks!!! Its been alot of world building (why the book has taken years :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. I have a friend helping my proofread the earlier chapters, so the grammar will get alot better before aug 1 :D