Hi, I really enjoy your book—you're doing a great job! I wanted to point out that you use the term "firebending" quite frequently throughout the chapters. It might be helpful to vary the language a bit. For instance, instead of always saying "fire bending," you might consider using something different to describe her ability. The reason I say this is because we, the readers, already know what powers she has, so some variation could enhance the reading experience. Keep up the great work!
Ps. please do not take this the wrong way. I'm not sure if you open to suggestions
