@Amelia4258
Hi! I love your story, I wanted to ask you how often do you publish?
Hello!! I try and post as often as I can, but roughly like once a month. But don’t worry I’ve got more chapters written up just waiting to be checked over and published xx
Hi, I really enjoy your book—you're doing a great job! I wanted to point out that you use the term "firebending" quite frequently throughout the chapters. It might be helpful to vary the language a bit. For instance, instead of always saying "fire bending," you might consider using something different to describe her ability. The reason I say this is because we, the readers, already know what powers she has, so some variation could enhance the reading experience. Keep up the great work!
Ps. please do not take this the wrong way. I'm not sure if you open to suggestions
Hi! Thank you so much for writing this, I’m always open to suggestions and I appreciate your message. I will try my best and include some variation- I usually do my writing late at night as that is when I get the best ideas for the plot but I perhaps need to start going over what I’ve written more during the day so that I can work on the wording and just overall improvement.
Thank you and I’m glad you’re liking the story!