@AminityCrystal most critique is definitely helpful :) but be sure to know the difference between helpful advice and mean comments. Don't let someone with a story full of errors and cliches etc. start lecturing you as they have no room to talk :) I've had that in the past from random, (jealous) losers :P
I'm glad you enjoy one of my stories, I hope cherry bite lives up to your expectations :D thanks for the support and be sure to ask if you need anything :)
I'm sure your new addition to wattpad will be fab!
Peace out ox
