Amanda

Thank you for the dedication!  I've read through the chapter and will try to find some time to give you some feedback at some point.  :D

@YuffieProductions You're very welcome! I understand all too well how annoying it is when people just tell you "I like this/love this!" or "Update soon!" because, since I've hit a rut in my original stories, I've been writing fanfiction...haha. It's really annoying and I don't blame you for doing all you can to prevent it. I also like to help, and I'm looking forward to seeing whatever changes you choose to make! :)
          
          Also...he really didn't have the depressing backstory? I mean, the first version I read was mildly nice to him, but ever so slowly the new versions became more angsty...haha. Well....I'm sure that Cle will still be a complete badass :)

@PerpetualRainfall He originally didn't have that depressing backstory of abuse, so he was a lot more outspoken and outgoing than the TGL you read. Now in BM, he's a bit more like that old version (but definitely more developed than what my 9 year old mind came up with!).

Thanks for the feedback, Amanda! :D I thought I did put in some pain when Annie glomped him, but now going back, it wasn't prominent enough. i'll embellish that some more. :) 

@YuffieProductions Oh, I see! I have that sort of thing with some of my characters, too. OOOH, original Cle? That's interesting! I miss him. He's changed a lot and I haven't even been with you the whole time!
          
          You're very welcome...and I didn't think all of it was rushed, just part of it :)

@PerpetualRainfall well, it was more the characters that  I loved, and I still have the characters in BM (though their personalities are quite different). Cleon is back to my very first interpretation of him back when I first thought him up, so I'm very happy about that. I think I made him much too depressing in TGL. 
          
          And thank you for the comment! I think the entire story is rushed... so.. xD that's definitely my #1 priority with the next draft. 
          I totally see what you mean about the trigger happy thing. I'll see what I can do.

@YuffieProductions Are you serious?! I remember when you were affectionately treating it like the baby you'd never abandon. :)

@PerpetualRainfall Nah, not going to work on TGL ever again. That's thrown in the garbage bin forever. 

@YuffieProductions Oh, sorry! I'm just so used to replying to people on my profile. xD
          
          Hiatus? Is Stray on hiatus, too? 
          
          I wasn't really asking if Beastmaster was TGL, just asking if you'd changed the name of TGL again...but now that we're talking about, are you still going to work on TGL or are you just going to switch to Beastmaster since you said it was better? XD

@PerpetualRainfall D: Ohmygosh, when people reply to me on their own profiles, i don't always get notified in my news feed. This is horrid. I'll have to check back manually. @_@ 
          
          Eh, TEoS is on hiatus right now anyway, so you have all the time in the world to catch up. 
          
          Oh, and I forgot to answer your other question. Beastmaster isn't TGL. It's a completely different story, but I'm just using the same setting and characters. Nearly everyone's personality has changed considerably, including Cle and Kai's. Joren is a commoner now. :P I think it's immensely better than TGL. The plot flows much more smoothly and the characters are rounder with better motivations and characterizations. World building is better.... 
          It's just better. :D