AmoraPantila

@Rubyqueen19998 will be my new second account for brand fresh new stories 

SamsonOdejimi

Hi Amora, I came across your profile while looking through stories where authors were open to critiques. I noticed you've created quite a collection of stories, and it's always great to see writers continuing to develop their craft.
          
          If you're still looking for thoughtful feedback, I'd be happy to help. I provide detailed beta reading focused on pacing, character development, dialogue, plot consistency, emotional impact, and the overall reader experience. My goal is to point out not only what works, but also why it works and where a story could become even stronger.
          
          Are you currently looking for feedback on a specific story, or are you working on something new? I'd love to hear about it.

P37814

Heyyy , no pressure at ALLLLLLL just wondering if you were gonna continue your 9-1-1 story????

Sundance364

@AmoraPantila by the way in your Watery witch Harry Potter book? Is the trace still on Serenity or was it removed when she hit her Mermaid growth spurt?
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P37814

Yeah ofc and pls don’t apologise, take you’re time and il be praying for her and I hope she’ll be okay 
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AmoraPantila

@P37814 yes I will I'm sorry I've Just been taking care of my grandma who has colon cancer 
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5starr_Me

If you can, can you like watch Descendants 4 and make a book about it please

5starr_Me

Yes that would be good
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AmoraPantila

@5starr_Me I'm thinking of My Dust fantasy story adding the younger version of Ares and Aphrodite and staring the son of mystique
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