Amulet_Strawberry

@trappedasaprep1023 Waaaah I didn't know you still came on here <3 I'm really busy but I'll try to figure something out

visionsofsugarplum

Really? Cause idk how I can possibly transition it! I was thinking about like since (SPOILER) I was going to have Prudence kill Haylee off in the very last chapter at the ball, so maybe Haylee would wake up and find out she's been in like a coma??? for three years and that SHE was the one that got hit by the car... trying to save Nick. idk What do you think about that one? I've had it in my head since like May.

Amulet_Strawberry

@trappedasaprep1023 No, please don't delete it ): it's a great story just the way it is, maybe you could somehow transition it into where Nick comes back to life and then Haylee dies? Maybe that could be the ending, and you could make a sequel to how you wanted the story to be in the first place? Sorry if I'm not being any help, I'm not very good at thinking about this stuff...But please, just don't delete it.

visionsofsugarplum

hey dude, idk if I should continue Poor unfortunate souls...
          it's like the plot I've written is so confusing cause idk where it's going y'know? and my writing pretty much sucks on this one, well it's my first story on here, and I love it but it's like so mediocre now, and I wanna try different writing styles now. But another thing is like to be honest it was never supposed to be in Haylee's POV. I meant for the whole story to be Nick's. he was the one who was like supposed to lose Haylee. He wasn't supposed to die. I like just remebered that! Should I re write it from Nick's pov?? Cause it's a whole different story though. So maybe I should delete Poor Unfortunate Souls nd do it how it was supposed to be. please msg me on facebook or here please, I need your help allot!