I don't believe in myself very much because I am nervous of what people will think of my writing. I have just started out and would really like to write some more. At the moment I am writing a book but find myself being anxious of uploading it. I would really like people's honest opinion and suggestions of how to improve it once it is uploaded

Notice!!
When I publish a new part of a story I will go back and add improvements. So if you're wondering why my parts are so short its because it isn't complete. It will only be complete once I've added a new part