Dear Followers,
After receiving critiques, I've added some more background information to the beginning of chapter one. I've also edited chapters two through five for grammar/typos. The story remains the same with just a couple of details tweaked here and there (for example, Keith is now "Keithan").
I've also just posted the latest chapter up. I hope the ones who are reading this story enjoy it.
Thanks again for following me,
Amy