AnonymousMessenger

@An0nymousMessenger Thank you for reading! I truly appreciate your comments and critiques, as I aim to portray Ayanokoji and Horikita as they are presented in both the light novel and the anime. I was also heavily inspired by your fanfic, “I’m Your Choice,” particularly their first meeting in the library, which heavily influenced well more like inspired me to make them meet up in the library as well.

@thesammytrainer 
            
            I just finished reading it. Thanks for sharing! Here's my honest take:
            
            You've got a solid concept. The idea of Horikita and Ayanokouji meeting before the bus scene is a believable what-if and opens up an interesting change in dynamics early on.
            
            Character-wise, it's not bad. Ayanokouji’s internal monologue starts off well, especially with the philosophical touches and commentary on society. But at times, his reactions felt a bit too expressive or awkward compared to his usual self. Horikita also came off more harsh than coldly blunt, so dialing that down would help her feel more canon-accurate.  A slower buildup would also feel more natural.
            
            Overall, it has a solid foundation with a good effort on the tone! Thank you again for sharing!

@An0nymousMessenger Alright, I appreciate it. Here you go! https://www.wattpad.com/story/396772497-classroom-of-the-elite-just-the-two-of-us

@An0nymousMessenger ohhhh that’s tough! I completely agree with you.

@thesammytrainer 
            Yes! I usually have one major ship per fandom, and for COTE, it happens to be Kiyozune!