ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

Anaisabelhg

I loove your stories, the plot, how it seems like you planned everything, if I could give you feedback for something would be to focus less on the descriptions and reflections. its nice to have them but try to describe them less so that the reader doesnt loose focus. another thing would be to try and find your own style. thats what makes artists famous, its their originality. as long as anyone could have written your story it looses its value, I don’t mean to offend you or anything I just thought of it while reading your story and I’m very exited to read the next book of yours!!!
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