Anajiz101

@AggieDiva35 don't worry about me posting negative about your writings because I just read one and I'm hooke!!! I like ur style n stories... But girl.. How the heck can I get the rest of the full figured chapters 13. 14. & 15??? 

Anajiz101

Ok Hun... I read your story ssry I couldn't read it earlier cuz I just started skool n well it's complicated... I have forensics instead of regular science.... Ug!!! Anyways... I like the title alot but u need o b more descriptive
          On your settings n characters use your senses make me feel like I'm there for example: Lucas- make me feel how torn he was wen he saw her on the hospital bed, how she looked, were the bruises r located how the doctors look at her is it in pity or disappointed or wat.... U get wat I mean??? But overall your story line is good 

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