hi ananya,
i was reading your story waltz of two hearts, the concept and storyline is very hooking, single dad and romance, it's always wow!
but can i please suggest you something, nothing critic, but as a reader i would like to share my thoughts. since there were no spaces after paragraphs, reading it became a little difficult also, the pauses and change in scene got mixed. and, you should try chat gpt or ai to just improvise a little, it adds extra masala to the story, the one which we want in it but sometimes couldn't form in words.
again, apologies if you found it rude of me to comment like that, but i had pure intentions.
anyway, lots of love and success to you!
if you're a reader as well, do give a try to my stories, they are short romcom chaos, only happy endings, little rona dhona, cause it adds drama and character ;)
(ps- i love your name, that's my sister's name too)
