Okay guys I need honesty please. Wattpad is my escape and place to share my thoughts but its also my practice realm for my stories if that makes sense. I use yall’s feedback when you comment and so forth. I have so many other stories I'm working on.
But anyway on the new title I was going with symbolism with Fabia and Sabin. I had a list and that one repeatedly was my top contender but now I'm anxious about it. I overthink everything, forgive me.
I was trying to hit the idea “In his hands,” like both physically and figuratively Sabins hands, his control, his power. “Her teeth,” meant Fabia’s bite back. She does submit but not always. I quite literally imagined her kneeling and him holding her jaw and she's baring her teeth. She's still kneeling, she's still submitting but she still fights back. In your opinion does the title work or should I revise?
