@AndrewMDavis
If my son or grandson were reading your self intro they UST might feel challenged I doubt you could the them, me yes them lots of luck, grandson has beaten black belts. Last fight a person swung a punch that end the fight cause grandson Bros that persons arm, accidentally while blocking.
Minor grammatical and sentence/paragraph structure updates for chapters 1-3. Random word mishaps, inconsistent phrasings and the like. Let me know if I missed anything by commenting (if you read it and don't just ignore this message).
Comment, Vote, Do yo thang.
I went through chapters 47 and 48 and corrected some grammatical errors in both, word splurges that decided they wanted to combine themselves, weird tense malfunctions and added some extra, necessary descriptions for some parts. I'll continue to edit and update as I go along, for now, continue to enjoy, vote and do whatevs!
All chapters of Genesis are officially live! The new version is unedited, and Wattpad caused a few errors with the transfer! When you take a read just write a comment and let me know what you find! Let me know what you like, what you dislike, and how you think I could improve any part! As always, take a read, vote, comment, follow! You cool! Thanks guys!
YAY! An actual update! After a long period of time, I have now updated Genesis! Chapters 1 through 44 are now live and available to read, enjoy, comment and vote on. I'd love to hear what you like, and what you don't necessarily like. What catches your eye? How can I improve, or make something more clear?
For new readers and followers, I appreciate the time you have taken and may take to read!
Thanks again, and enjoy!
So, it's been awhile since I have made any sort of update. September to be exact, which obviously makes me super good at this stuff :p.
Anyway, in reality, I am seven chapters (plus the epilogue) from completing the rewrite of my first novel. Sometime within the next week I will be posting through chapter 35 and then additionally adding the names (maybe) of the chapters through the end of the novel, but if not that, then I'll add at least through 45.
If you haven't yet finished what I have posted, I encourage you to do so. It just keeps getting better.
Thanks for your diligence if you've been keeping up here!
Let me know if there are any questions! I'd love to help you understand. (I do get notifications)
Alright, after a little while of inactivity (during which I promise I have been writing), I have now posted chapters 23, 24 and 25, as well as the chapter names through chapter 35 to give you all a little sneak peak of whats to come!
I'm really excited for the new updates in my work. Give it a read, vote, comment, follow, whatever! I really appreciate the recent follows and reads! Thank you for reading Genesis!
Update number 9000: The first 22 chapters are now up and running!! Things are moving along pretty quickly, make sure you take some time to catch up!!
As always, take a read, comment, vote, give me a follow so you can get updates. Let me know if anything could be fixed or doesn't make sense! Always looking for feedback. Thanks guys!
The first 18 chapters of the Genesis overhaul are now up on wattpad! Feel free to take a look, a vote, a comment, whatever you feel you'd like to do!! You won't be disappointed!
Yo, Critters. Chapters 7, 8 and 9 are now up and ready to rumble in this new beauty called Genesis. Chapters 10 and 11 should be up and written by the end of the night; that is, assuming my battery lasts in my computer...I left my charger somewhere...I can't quite remember. So...cheers!