Andrew_Sanders

Eighth (and final) chapter is up! This is a work-in-progress so all feedback is needed and much appreciated. Thank you so much for reading!

Annteee

No pressure, as time permits. ❤️
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Andrew_Sanders

@Annteee yes! I’m working on the last chapter and the epilogue (I posted a version I wasn’t happy with...I’m just a little slow right now).
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Annteee

@Andrew_Sanders Are you continuing the story?
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taxham

Hey, I added this book a while ago and never got around reading it. What a lovely and very thoughtful book. I enjoyed it very much and I hope you will write some more in the future

Andrew_Sanders

@taxham I plan on it!  I actually am trying to fix a few flaws with this book. I don't like the ending, that will be completely changed; I've re-written the first chapter as well. Hopefully, I'll have it done soon. Thank you so much for reading!
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Caemarion

Is “John” finished?
          
          Honestly the book left me really conflicted. On one hand; the bones of the story are pretty reasonable. I know the ending should probably seem like a happy one but I just sort of felt sad for all parties.
          
          I don’t disagree with any point of the story (for what that’s worth, if anything) it just sort of felt sorry for everyone.
          
          I’m also not pretending to be any kind of expert, but I definitely think the pacing is VERY fast. It would be nice to see it fleshed out a little more. See more of their relationship development and just really fill in a lot of the rushed bits.
          
          Mostly though, well done. This book had an impact on me as a reader. Thank you for sharing.

Andrew_Sanders

I admit, I’m just as conflicted about it as you are! I plan on going over it with a fine-tooth comb and trying to work on some of the problems you had with it (frankly, I have the same problems you did). 
            
            I appreciate you private messaging me about this! 
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Andrew_Sanders

Eighth (and final) chapter is up! This is a work-in-progress so all feedback is needed and much appreciated. Thank you so much for reading!

Annteee

No pressure, as time permits. ❤️
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Andrew_Sanders

@Annteee yes! I’m working on the last chapter and the epilogue (I posted a version I wasn’t happy with...I’m just a little slow right now).
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Annteee

@Andrew_Sanders Are you continuing the story?
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