Andrew

@andycain I agree that the end of Clouded Vision was confusing, but I'm happy you liked it.  Jake was funny when I first wrote him he was like seven but in the end I realized he needed to be more mature. Another interesting little tidbit that you're probably not interested in but I'll tell you anyway is that I was planning to make Vivika Jake's mom haha.Btw,  I'm planning to update a new chapter to Magic Weaver tomorrow, and you should update soon too! I want to see where this goes

@shellpaperheart  Thanx. I have to say - I loved Clouded Vision. It got a bit confusing at the end but otherwise it was brilliant. I loved the storyline and the characters, especially Jake. He's cool. So excited about MagicWeaver so please, please upload. I'm dying here.

@andycain there's a new chapter in Magic Weaver if you're interested. For your age I'd say your writing style isn't too bad.  So I'm curious-what do you think of Clouded Vision? It was my first long story that I actually finished. Looking back on it I think it's really bad-I'm much more fond of magic weaver- butI still love it because it's mine. 

@shellpaperheart  Thanx for becoming a fan. I am 13 and yes my grammar is not up to scratch, as constantly reminded by my parents lol.  I cant wait for more of magic weaver and am almost finished with clouded vision. Btw thanx for not giving Cedric a dragon because that would have made my story seem like stealing.

well I read what you have posted on Ivory. I'm a sucker for dragon stories lol. I almost made Cedric find a dragon egg(well actually Emily found it and gave it to Cedric) which was going to be the reason that he had to escape from the castle but I scrapped the idea and made him a magic weaver instead. Um ur description says ur young, so how young are you? Just wondering. Well your grammar could use a touch of work(in 1 part you should have used they're instead of their) but it's still better than soooo many writers on here so don't even worry about it. So anyway, I voted and I'm also going to fan bc you caught my attention. Btw, thanks for fanning me! I hope you enjoy reading future chapters in Magic Weaver

Omigosh there's actually a guy on here. Good for you, I'm tired of all the lousy vampire romance novels. Anyway, if you could take the time to read my story Magic Weaver, and vote, comment, and fan I'd really appreciate it!