Hey Anee
Hope u don't finish this in 6parts
Since u have talked about exes, plan on them doing something evil, don't stretch it please, show Raya insecurities, and let RAYA come out stronger......
I hope u also show their love for eo, even without son in equation.......ie of course he is the reason 4 them being together but their love 4 eo being seperate from love for eo as duggus parents
Also mayb u could show P s insecurity regards her clothes and looks, and R is always impeccable and surrounded by good lookers.......and how R has her come out of it.
Sorry just so many things came to my mind reading ur work that I couldn't stop.
Just suggestions, u r doing a gr8 story.......if something strikes u its OK, if it doesn't, don't worry
Looking fwd