Anee_M

New part has been updated.. do check out
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surprised-soul

@Anee_M I really wish you finished your unfinished stories! they are such good reads and leaves one wanting more of the wonderful world you have created.
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Berrygoat

Hey Anee
          Hope u don't finish this in 6parts
          
          Since u have talked about exes, plan on them doing something evil, don't stretch it please,  show Raya insecurities,  and let RAYA come out stronger......
          
          I hope u also show their love for eo, even without son in equation.......ie of course he is the reason 4 them being together but their love 4 eo being seperate from love for eo as duggus parents 
          
          Also mayb u could show P s insecurity regards her clothes and looks, and R is always impeccable and surrounded by good lookers.......and how R has her come out of it.
          
          Sorry just so many things came to my mind reading ur work that I couldn't stop.
          
          Just suggestions,  u r doing a gr8 story.......if something strikes u its OK, if it doesn't,  don't worry
          
          Looking fwd