HyunlixIsReal_STFU

Hiiii! C'est moi! 
          I really liked the story so far! The idea is good and I genuinely have no idea and thus wonder where this is headed.
          
          But since you asked for some tips, here are sum;)
          
          1. I noticed you forget a lot of punctuation marks, please don't do this it's really confusing
          2. Something I like to do with (a/n) is instead of writing it straight into the chapter, I write it in the comments:) I don't really know why tho, I guess because it stops inevitable distractions from the story.
          3. Make sure to read a lot of books for inspiration! This REALLY helped my writing and storylines. And if English is not your native tongue, than it's even more important for you to do so!
          
          These are some really basic tips. I hope i didn't come over as to critical despite warning you, because I do like the story:)

HyunlixIsReal_STFU

@Anem0ne4 nppppp<333
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Anem0ne4

@HyunlixIsReal_STFU I hope u doo keep reading my book(hopefully books) and yesyes Ik it's hard to get readers but I wanna write for experience not just the readers but I'd really appreciate people reading my books. And I'm soo glad u stayed consistent for that half year cuz I love reading ur stories smmm!! ✨✨ I won't get much time to write at the moment sadly, I am traveling and am kind of busy atm but I will try my best to continue and hopefully finish this book!! And again lysm for commenting and regonising meee ✨✨
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HyunlixIsReal_STFU

@Anem0ne4 Great! I'll keep reading your story, and giving you tips. I do have to tell you tho: in the very beginning, it can be quite hard to get readers. This will happen by itself, but it takes time. I was writing for nearly half a year before i got recognition:)
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