V-Quest
Hey ophelia
I just finished reading your story and honestly… wow. You’ve done such an amazing job! The effort, creativity, and emotion you’ve poured into it really shows. Your characters feel real, the plot kept me hooked, and your writing style is so smooth—it’s rare to come across something this good.
Writers like you are special. You’ve got something powerful, and I genuinely believe more people need to discover your story.
If you're okay with it, I’d love to share a few small tips that could help get your book in front of more readers:
AngelFajardoooo
@V-Quest thank you, though I believe this chapter only went smoothly because it took me a long time to actually publish it (I was gatekeeping it and kept re-editing when I got bored in class) so I can't promise that each chapter would be as good as the other, especially since I wrote this story last year but now I'm a graduating student and I have to focus on studies, which is more of a reason to accept help and a few tips-- though I will not be taking suggestions if they ever-so-slightly shift the story because I have a plan for this book, it's my second greatest idea.