Hi!
I'm a new reader, I've just finished reading your fanfic and I must say. The idea and plot was splendid, i love the way you started izuku and nejire relationship during childhood. And I get how bakugou is a hot-head... nuclear headed person, I would like to see how you will develop him in the future chaps. Finally, i totally agree with izuku being mad at all might cuz he literally broke him inside, I'm interested how izuku will do in the physical aspect of UA entrance exam.
Overall it's good. My honest opinion is be clear with the pov switches and grammar but this develops more as you write.
Thank you for making this. This type of fanfics is rare cuz others have too much bs, abusing writers power. I really love it. Hope my opinion helps you.
