AngelTimelord

Hey guys, so I know I said I was going to let this account die (Despite receiving nonstop notifications for a certain supernatural story) but I'm curious about something, and need some opinions. For a few months now I've been working on a story of my own. It's not gonna be super long, ten or eleven chapters maybe, since it's my first one. I know pretty much everyone here is either a writer or an avid reader, so I was wondering if you guys would give me a hand with editing. I'd post the first draft of each chapter as I finish them and then you guys leave comments about what you think needs to be edited. I know it's not the same as going to an editor, but I've never had problems with sharing my work. Besides, who knows writing better than the writers. Plus it's cheaper than getting an editor and I'm in college and can't afford that stuff. So please let me know what you guys think about this!! If I do post it, it'll be be on my live account, I'm just posting here to notify all of you, since I have one follower on my other account. Thanks!!

sad_lonely_loser

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Listen here you fuckty fuck. You should learn what a trigger warning is. Its this magical thing where you tell your readers that you have grafic and or triggering content in your damn story, not everyone can handle reading that type of shit and you just conned them into reading your fucked up shit. Also let's talk about you romanticizeing mental illness, that shit is just not okay. And even if you were trying to do a light at the end of the tunnel type thing, I get that, but there were so many different ways you could have fucking done it. Sit down really quick because I'm going to teach you something. Use your fucking brackets, and tell someone that you are fucked in the head. Let the people who fall upon your shit story that you don't have a damn filter. So that if they are not comfortable reading about that type of shit, don't have to fucking read it. Now edit your damn story and add your fucking trigger warnings in it, so that in the future you don't get more shit like this, and you don't TRIGGER someone.

AngelTimelord

Hey guys, so I know I said I was going to let this account die (Despite receiving nonstop notifications for a certain supernatural story) but I'm curious about something, and need some opinions. For a few months now I've been working on a story of my own. It's not gonna be super long, ten or eleven chapters maybe, since it's my first one. I know pretty much everyone here is either a writer or an avid reader, so I was wondering if you guys would give me a hand with editing. I'd post the first draft of each chapter as I finish them and then you guys leave comments about what you think needs to be edited. I know it's not the same as going to an editor, but I've never had problems with sharing my work. Besides, who knows writing better than the writers. Plus it's cheaper than getting an editor and I'm in college and can't afford that stuff. So please let me know what you guys think about this!! If I do post it, it'll be be on my live account, I'm just posting here to notify all of you, since I have one follower on my other account. Thanks!!

AngelTimelord

So, if any of you are looking for my new account, it's Mafia Detective. I will say now, it's has a lot of different content than this account. It's got a lot more to it. If you like what I have here, then you can stay with this account, but if you like (currently at least) Bungou Stray Dogs or Death Note, I'm working on two stories for those on the other account. I won't be posting much of the old things I used to write. I'm trying to turn the corner into being an actual author. That's why I made the new account. I didn't want my name out there and what not. Anyways, if you are interested in seeing where my work goes from here then please follow me there. Honestly if you enjoy my crappy 9th grade writing then you will enjoy my half decent 12th grade writing.

AngelTimelord

So, this account is rather old now. A couple years at least. My writing style has changed a lot since then. I'm going to stop updating this account and likely create a new one. I'll still leave it open because I know some of my stories are still read. They won't be getting updated though, and if it's one I still plan on writing it will likely be transferred to the new account. Thank you everyone who has followed me through the years and thank you to those of you who enjoyed my stories. They were never that great, but you all liked them and that's what matters! I hope you all are well. It was good while it lasted :)