AngelWings88

Please read it and find anything to correct. Could you do that please?

sure what's up?

Can you check out my story it's called Just Another Beauty 
          
          Vote and comment? 
          
          Thanks:) 
          

Sorry about the quotation marks at the end there. That's a small typo.

Blurb (for ‘The Underwater Train’)
          Ayumi is your ordinary eleven year old Japanese girl, excluding her dead mother. Her father is the CEO of his company and is building a new train - the first underwater train ever. After a small incident, Ayumi suspects that there is a criminal on the loose, ready to destroy all the plans The Underwater Train Company have … and its workers. She sets out to find the culprit before it is too late, but the hijacker may be closer than she thinks. 
          
          The events that unravel come with a price, but at what cost? Or will it only lead to death?"

where's your blurb?

Thanks forreading My story :D I'll work on thwe 2nd one a little longer

@iambeastxD uh thanks...how did you find me? just wondering.

Hello:) I'm Chandler 
          I'm new and was wondering if you could read my story? :)