Your description had me captivated. It told me what the story was shot, yet it didn't reveal much. Please, teach me how to write one! ;) But seriously, it looks like a really good book and I can't wait to read it. I only wish I could come up with something like this, but I'm more of a... 'come up with an idea, go with it, then slowly stop updating until I stop altogether' Anyway, interesting chapter, can't wait to read more :)