cakewriter18
Hey I noticed that you read in the werewolf genre and I was just wondering if you could spare the time to read my book. It is also in the werewolf genre and I recently started it. I would really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on what I need to fix. If you can't then I totally get it. If you can thanks supersonic time! My book is call Queen of all Kings and it's on my profile.
Angelu_de_amor
@NatalieB18 how can i message the feedback? The plot is good but you got loopholes in writing.... skipping writing small words creates huge difference in setting an atmosphere... when a word is missed the meaning change... the synopsis is a bit boring... but i like the story but there is something missing... hope you find it
Angelu_de_amor
@NatalieB18 how can i message the feedback? The plot is good but you got loopholes in writing.... skipping writing small words creates huge difference in setting an atmosphere... when a word is missed the meaning change... the synopsis is a bit boring... but i like the story but there is something missing... hope you find it