roxy_toki

Hello :) 
          I was wondering if you could read my first story?
          So k can improve and see what is good.
          
          Thankyou : )

AngieFantauzzi

Hi!! This is super late and I’m so sorry but it’s very good for a first story. 
            I would work a little on grammar and your transitions, but other then that I like the story so far!
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