Wow Author i like ur novel Shattering shadow, U ASKED FOR PROGRESS. I want jameson to have more backstory, i love how you depicted his feeling of numbness i want more of that but make it last longer, you only make it last for one chapter i want more, put more chemistry. Also the poly relationship i like it, not that i don't want stephan backstory and the rest but what really drew me into this story was the way you talked about jameson, give him more depth, it is taken for granted, you have done enough Raven, i want jameson condition now, make it serious, create more depth. For real this story has the potential of going into list of mental health bl stories. To me i would prefer
( jameson should battle with panic attack but keeping it secret, depression but only his sister knows for now, how good would it be if you make that numbness into a potential of DID(multiple personality) to make the chapter longer, keep chemistry going like that in the relationship THE TRUTH IS JAMESON MADE ME READ, HE IS THE MC SO FOCUS THE MENTAL HEALTH ASPECT ON HIM MOSTLY. Gosh i can't wait, finished reading in like 5 hours.. Pls if you can't do this, then just let my jameson have more depth, more angst to him that not even his sisters know, Create more mystery around him without just his abandonment issue. Adios
