@Ani1318
Hello! Sorry for plugging my story. If you have time I would like to invite you to read my story "Our February's" I will do the same. I'll do my best to support, vote, and leave a comment to your stories! If you find this note a bit rude, you can delete it. Thank you! Merry Christmas
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Pls notify me if u do, vote this story>>https://www.wattpad.com/story/375969411?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ZchStories
Hello I'm starting red cry now, my attention was captured by the cover I'll tell you about my read
@cocohoodiez My, thank you! I'm glad you think so highly of it! And yes, I meant to give chemistry between them, it's amazing that you noticed! As for the mistake, I'll try to read it again and try to correct it. English isn't my first language and many mistakes are overlooked without such intention.
@Ani1318 Wow!!!! I loved it I would definitely imagine t as a movie Did you mean to give Alex and Aaron that much chemistry cause it was really visible to me atleast A little criticism: it got really confusing when you put the adverbs behind the verbs Example: "it was cold really out at night" it looks awkward I hope this helps
Greetings, I am a new aspiring poet on this platform, in a hasty attempt to reach out to like minded people, I am nothing but another mere being living amongst such. I have started my own series and will publish one piece off of my journal everyday, kindly give it an opportunity and share your views likewise, if you like it please drop a vote and stay tuned for more. However my poetry is rather dark themed and suitable for mature readers only.
Regards,
Sapphirus
https://www.wattpad.com/story/369736786?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Sapphirus_Infinite
Hi! I just wanted to come on here and say that I really enjoyed your writing! If you ever have some free time or need a break from writing be sure to check out my books! Keep on writing! I cannot wait to see what you write next!
@ Sharkuwu210 Ah, thank you so much! It makes me very happy to see people like you enjoying my writing! I'm currently taking a small break from both reading and writing but I'll make sure to check out your writing as well when I'll have time!
Thanks for being a faithful reader! Really appreciate it!
I'm still reading your story. Haven't forgotten, just been really busy.
As far as Cosmos, I'm not continuing the story as of right now. If there's anything I can do to clarify the story or give a short synopsis, I'd be happy.
@ StoryCoach I seriously can't wait to see your story complete! It feels like a perfect mix of sci-fi and fantasy with a little bit of mystery for the protagonist. Thank you so much for explaining and keep up the good work!
@Ani1318 Not at all impolite! So "sample" come to think of it now was probably not the best word to use. I meant it as a sample of my own writing ability (perhaps I'll change the term). In honesty, I'm saving because I plan to rework the plot. The story world its based in is massive (as with any scifi/fantasy). So far you've probably gathered that the human empire in this story has emigrated from earth, but is also a hermit empire that refuses to explore the rest of the galaxy. They fear what is out there, which is why they built up their military so much. Well, our protagonist stands to inherit the throne to that empire, but she's about to learn (the hard way) just how much was kept secret from her. The story was supposed to open into exploring the cosmos (hence the title) and its galaxies, but most importantly the protagonist needs to understand her power and where it came from. You see, she has the ability to control gravity (attraction). You find out later on that there are more like her who can control one of the 4 fundamental forces of the universe (Formation, Alteration, Interaction, Attraction). Only she can control attraction (gravity). So her purpose is to figure out why that is. That's just a rough idea, but I'm bound to change the premise. I already have ideas.
Thanks for your vote! Hope it’s something you enjoy, don’t be afraid to comment what you like/don’t like!
@ StoryCoach No problem! That's the first time I read something like that and I have to say that I find it very interesting! I'm looking forward to more chapters!
bru, your "A Devil in Disguise" is such a freaking masterpiece. Thank you for writing it!
@ VergenCant Thank you very much!!! I'm so happy that you liked it! That really gives me motivation to write even more!
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