Nuwwie

Sorry gonna ramble here cuz you're nice to interact with. I might think about writing about an Aventurine story fic next after my current fic is finished =3= made me think I could be capable of doing so after reading yours (less dark and maybe more fluffier, whatever my mind could think of). I have written one on Ao3 but its really cooked (as in its very explicit) so I don't really dare to put it on wattpad kekw. As always thanks for voting on my fic even though you have no clue about the game and the character  I appreciate it a lot!

Ani1318

@Nuwwie Wonderful! Just so it happens I also have an art account so I'll make sure to give you a follow.
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Nuwwie

@Nuwwie you can talk to me on my art account on ig then! Its called nurrie.draws. And as for the fic on ao3 I won't tell you to read it then lol. Its pretty dark for the general audience XD
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Ani1318

@Nuwwie Then I may try it out, although I get really uncomfortable with explicit scenes, that's why I don't write any. And as you say, it really is a shame that the message inbox has been removed. If you are comfortable tho or open about it, I wouldn't mind adding you on Ig. Also! It's a good thing that you started writing again and I hope you'll continue to do so! Whether it's original works or fanfics, writing is definitely something that you have potential on.
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KittyHenriatte03

Hello! Sorry for plugging my story. If you have time I would like to invite you to read my story "Our February's" I will do the same. I'll do my best to support, vote, and leave a comment to your stories! If you find this note a bit rude, you can delete it. Thank you! Merry Christmas

cocohoodiez

Hello I'm starting red cry now, my attention was captured by the cover I'll tell you about my read

cocohoodiez

@Ani1318 no pressure I just noticed is all
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Ani1318

@cocohoodiez My, thank you! I'm glad you think so highly of it! And yes, I meant to give chemistry between them, it's amazing that you noticed! As for the mistake, I'll try to read it again and try to correct it. English isn't my first language and many mistakes are overlooked without such intention.
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cocohoodiez

@Ani1318 Wow!!!! I loved it I would definitely imagine t as a movie
            Did you mean to give Alex and Aaron that much chemistry cause it was really visible to me atleast
            
            A little criticism: it got really confusing when you put the adverbs behind the verbs
            Example: "it was cold really out at night" it looks awkward I hope this helps
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Sapphirus_Infinite

Greetings, I am a new aspiring poet on this platform, in a hasty attempt to reach out to like minded people, I am nothing but another mere being living amongst such. I have started my own series and will publish one piece off of my journal everyday, kindly give it an opportunity and share your views likewise, if you like it please drop a vote and stay tuned for more. However my poetry is rather dark themed and suitable for mature readers only.
          Regards,
          
          Sapphirus
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/369736786?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Sapphirus_Infinite

Sharkuwu210

Hi! I just wanted to come on here and say that I really enjoyed your writing!  If you ever have some free time or need a break from writing be sure to check out my books! Keep on writing! I cannot wait to see what you write next!

Ani1318

@ Sharkuwu210  Ah, thank you so much! It makes me very happy to see people like you enjoying my writing! I'm currently taking a small break from both reading and writing but I'll make sure to check out your writing as well when I'll have time!
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TheStoryScholar

Thanks for being a faithful reader! Really appreciate it!
          I'm still reading your story. Haven't forgotten, just been really busy. 
          
          As far as Cosmos, I'm not continuing the story as of right now. If there's anything I can do to clarify the story or give a short synopsis, I'd be happy.

TheStoryScholar

@Ani1318 Thanks a lot! You too!
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Ani1318

@ StoryCoach  I seriously can't wait to see your story complete! It feels like a perfect mix of sci-fi and fantasy with a little bit of mystery for the protagonist. Thank you so much for explaining and keep up the good work!
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TheStoryScholar

@Ani1318 Not at all impolite! 
            
            So "sample" come to think of it now was probably not the best word to use. I meant it as a sample of my own writing ability (perhaps I'll change the term). In honesty, I'm saving because I plan to rework the plot. The story world its based in is massive (as with any scifi/fantasy). 
            
            So far you've probably gathered that the human empire in this story has emigrated from earth, but is also a hermit empire that refuses to explore the rest of the galaxy. They fear what is out there, which is why they built up their military so much. Well, our protagonist stands to inherit the throne to that empire, but she's about to learn (the hard way) just how much was kept secret from her. 
            
            The story was supposed to open into exploring the cosmos (hence the title) and its galaxies, but most importantly the protagonist needs to understand her power and where it came from.
            
            You see, she has the ability to control gravity (attraction). You find out later on that there are more like her who can control one of the 4 fundamental forces of the universe (Formation, Alteration, Interaction, Attraction). Only she can control attraction (gravity). So her purpose is to figure out why that is.
            
            That's just a rough idea, but I'm bound to change the premise. I already have ideas.
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