Hello, again my fellow Humans, I am semi-back! I’ve been taking some downtime, you know summer break and all, but let me tell you I have been looking at my story (The Dragon Pit) and I realized that the antagonist isn’t exactly clear, if you went looking for him you could find him with relative ease but to people just casually reading, it isn’t gapingly clear, nor does his character have “intelligence” heck he may be 40 but he is currently more a mindless youngster than a, well antagonist so I recently went and made him a bit more mature, I will be going back soon and updating his behavior as best I can, along with that I will try to make the story more realistic, I am happy though with the story, it is actually one of the best stories I’ve made in my life, so yeah, well hope you guys have a good one!