Hi,
I just finished reading your story and I loved it so much! Your writing is amazing. I was completely drawn into Mai’s world, from her intense sparring sessions with Shoko sensei to the emotional turmoil she feels over Ranma. The way you captured her inner conflict trying to stay strong while dealing with heartbreak was so compelling. I couldn’t stop imagining how cool it would look as a comic!
The scene where Mai and Shoko sensei spar, with Shoko calling out Mai’s distraction and Mai insisting she’s fine, was so vivid and intense. I could already see it as a beautifully illustrated panel, with their movements fluid yet powerful, and Mai’s frustration evident in her expression. And the moment Mai walks into school, bruised and emotionally drained, only to face Ranma’s awkward attempts to explain himself, was such a perfect mix of tension and vulnerability that would translate perfectly into a comic.
I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to draw your story into a comic. No pressure, of course. I just think your work would look absolutely stunning in comic form. If you’re interested, you can message me on X (SarahSummers), Instagram (sarahthedelusional), or add me on Discord (sarah_summers). Let me know what you think!
Best,
Sarah